The feedback I got was super helpful.
For next week, things I need to look in to:
- make a domain map
- make a slide that breaks out my schedule into a map
- incorporate statistics and citations into a slide
- pull together a style frame with the images in the map
- precedents but only for shaping domain etc
- storyboard the narrative
- incorporate the notion of 21st century learning goals and media literacy (deploying technologies in the classroom, kids not just being consumers, but producers themselves, feeding into the hackability and re-mixability factor).
- think about flickr or videos for backgrounds